Part B52.Directions:A) Title: Parents are too
问题详情
Part B
52.Directions:
A) Title: Parents are too Permissive with Their Children Nowadays
B) Your composition should be based on the Outline given in Chinese below:
1.孩子成为家庭的中心,父母日渐失去应有的权威。
2.父母对孩子的溺爱和忽视导致表少年犯罪。
3.孩子的生活过于安逸对他们日后的成长不利。
You should write about 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET H. (20 points)
参考答案
正确答案:
[考题分析]写作本文可写成典型的三段式:先写出当前父母和孩子在家庭中关系的现状,然后可推测这种状况会带来的后果,最后表达自己的观点,并加上好的建议。需要注意的是,标题已限制了写作的内容,切不可漫无边际的写,而导致偏题。
参考范文:
Parents are too Permissive with Their Children Nowadays
There are countless articles on child care in magazines and newspapers. With so much unsolicited advice flying about, mum and dad just don't know what to do any more. In the end, they de nothing at all. So, from early childhood, the kids are in charge and parents' lives are regulated according to the needs of their off spring. When the little dears develop into teenagers, they take complete control. Lax authority over the years makes adolescent rebel lion against parents all the more violent, ff the young people are going to have a party, for instance, parents are asked to leave the house. Their presence merely spoils the fun. What else can the poor parents do but obey?
Children are hardy creatures and most of them survive the harmful influence of extreme permissiveness which is the normal condition in the modern household. But a great many do not. The spread of juvenile delinquency in our own age is largely due to pa rental laxity. Mother, believing that little Johnny can look after himself, is not at home when he returns from school, so little Johnny roams the streets. The dividing-line between permissiveness and sheer negligence is very fine indeed.
The psychologists have much to answer for. They should keep their mouths shut and let parents get on with the job. And ff children are knocked about a little bit in the process, it may not really
matter too much. At least this will help them to develop vigorous views of their own and give them something positive to react against. Perhaps there's some truth in the idea that children who've had a surfeit of happiness in their childhood emerge like stodgy puddings and fail to make a success of life.