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朝气蓬勃、充满活力、丰富多彩的上海是现代中国的缩影。【技巧点拨】修饰“上海”的定语较长，翻译时可以将该短语转换为句子，即：Shanghaiisadynamic，diverseandcolorfulcity．“是现代中国的缩影”可以处理为“city”的同位语：theveryepitomeofmodernChina。【参考译文】Shanghaiisadynamic，diverseandcolorfulcity—theveryepitomeofmodernChina．虽然上海的文化遗迹不能与北京媲美，但是上海迷人的城市风貌，风格各异的万图建筑为这座城市注入予无限的魅力。【词汇点睛】与……媲美rival；文化遗迹culturalheritage。【技巧点拨】此句包含“though”引导的让步状语从旬，也可以用“although”；中文是意合的语言，在翻译“上海的文化遗迹不能与北京媲美”时，需要调整语序，．表达为：ShanghaicannotrivalBeijinginculturalheritage．“风格各异的万国建筑”实际是指“风格各异的万国建筑风格”，故用“variedarchitecturalstyles”表达。【参考译文】ThoughShanghaicannotrivalBeijinginculturalheritage，itsattractivecosmopolitanfeelandvariedarchitecturalstylesgiveitacharmofitsown．今日之上海，已经成为享誉中外的国际大都市。【词汇点睛】享誉中外的world．famous；国际大都市internationalmetropolis。【技巧点拨】该句是简单句，顺译即可。其中，“享誉中外的”可译为：world．famous，world．renowned等。【参考译文】Today’sShanghaihasbecomeaworld-famousinternationalmetropolis．漫步在这座日新月异的城市里，你会发现许多精彩的历史亮点，隐现在众多摩天大楼背后的是上海发展变化的轨迹。【技巧点拨】该句包含两层含义，可处理为两个句子。前半部分可直译为：Whilewalkingthroughthisboomingcity，you’11findmanyglimpsesofitscolorfulpast．参考译文中用“awalk”作主语，更符合说明文的特征；后半部分用倒装句表达，使句式更加丰富，增加了译文文采。【参考译文】Awalkthroughthisboomingcityrevealsmanyglimpsesofitscolorfulpast．HiddenamongsttheskyscrapersareremainsoftheoriginalShanghai．它们记述了上海自19世纪末开埠以来，尤其是新中国成立以后，是如何迅猛发展的。【词汇点睛】新中国成立thefoundingofnewChina。【技巧点拨】该句主干为：它们讲述了上海是如何迅猛发展的。可译为：TheykeeponshowinghowShanghaihasbeendevelopingfastandenormously．“自19世纪末开埠以来”作状语：sinceits：openingasacommercialport-inthelatel9thcentury，“开埠”可以意译为“openingasacommercialport”；“尤其是新中国成立以后”顺译即可，需要注意“新中国成立”的英文表达。【参考译文】TheykeeponshowinghowShanghaihasbeendevelopingfastandenormouslysinceitsopeningasacommercialportinthelatel9thcentury，especiallyafterthefoundingofnewChina·全文翻译：Shanghaiisadynamic，diverseandcolorfulcity——theveryepitomeofmodernChina.ThoughShanghaicannotrivalBeijinginculturaleritage，itsattractivecosmopolitanfeelandvariedarchitecturalstylesgiveitacharmofitsown.Today"sShanghaihasbecomeaworld-famousinternationalmetropolis.Awalkthroughthisboomingcityrevealsmanyglimpsesofitscolorfulpast.HiddenamongsttheskyscrapersareremainsoftheoriginalShanghai.TheykeeponshowinghowShanghaihasbeendevelopingfastandenormouslysinceitsopeningasacommercialportinthelate19thcentury，especiallyafterthefoundingofnewChina.