Part Ⅴ Writing (30 minutes) Directions:For thi
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Part Ⅴ Writing (30 minutes)
Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1.当前社会上存在着许多不诚实的现象
2.诚实利人利己,做人应该诚实
It Pays to Be Honest 请帮忙给出正确答案和分析,谢谢!
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写作指导:写文章之前,应该先花上一分钟时间好好地审一下题。这是一篇命题作文,题目是ItPaystoBeHonest。其中payto意为“有利,值得”。因此文章应围绕“做人诚实非常值得”这一主题展开。在指令中给了中文提纲,所以按照提纲,第一段应介绍当前社会存在着许多不诚实的现象,如商人卖假货欺骗顾客,学生考试作弊欺骗老师等等,同时在这一段应表明自己对这种现象的反感。第二段提出观点诚实利人利己,做人应该诚实。并用具体的例子来说明这一点,例子可以是正面的,也可以是反面的。如范文中用的就是“狼来了”的反面例子。最后,结尾应强调做人应该诚实,这是人的基本素质。ItPaystoBeHonestFromthemassmediaandalsowithourowneyes,weknowmuchdishonestbehaviourexistedinoursociety.Forexample,businessmensellfakeproductstocheattheircustomers;studentscopyotherone'shomeworkordownloadillicitpaperfromInternettocheattheirteachers;andevenworse,therearemedicalpersonproducefakemedicineharmingthepatients.Seeingoursocietyisfilledwithsomanydishonestphenomena,Ican'thelpaskingmyselfwhat'swrongwithus?Whenwewereveryyoungweweretaughttheimportanceofbeinghonest.Iamsureeveryonemuststillrememberthatstory“wolfiscoming”.Inthestorythechildkeptcheatingotherpeoplethatwolfwascoming,butwhenthewolfreallycame,nobodytrustedhiswordsandhefinallysufferedhisowndishonesty.Alsowehaveheardmanystoriesthatpeoplebenefitfromtheirvirtuesofhonesty.Sosincewehavealreadyknownbeinghonestbenefitbothourselvesandotherpeople,whymanyofusarestilldishonest?Ihopeeveryonetobearinmindthatbeinghonestisthebasicqualityofhumanbeingandthenwewon'tbeafraidofany"wolf".