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you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Keep psychologically Healthy?You should write at least l20 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1.心理健康问题往往是导致疾病的原因 2.分析人们产生心理健康问题的原因(可从失业、压力过重、缺少支持、缺乏人际交往能力等方 面加以分析) 3.你认为人们应如何保持心理健康
How to Keep Psychologically Healthy?
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本题要求写一篇议论文,属问题解决型作文。根据提纲要求,本文应包括以下内容:指出心理健康问题的严重性;分析产生心理健康问题的原因;提出解决心理健康问题和保持心理健康的方法。【思路一】第一段指出心理健康问题的严重性.第二段分析原因:压力大,缺乏交流,孤独,忽视心理健康问题;第三段提出解决的方法。【范文一】HowtoKeepPsychologicallyHealthy?(1)Oneinfourpeoplewillexperiencesomekindofmentalhealthprobleminthecourseofayear.(2)Whenyoufailtomanagetheseproblems,theyarelikelytocausevariousmentalillnesses.(3)TheCausesofmentalhealthproblemsoftenvaryalotfromonecasetoanother.Intoday’ssociety,agoodnumberofpeoplearesufferingfromheavypressure.Otherslackcommunicationskills.Inaddition,alotofpeople(4)areignorantofpsychologicalknowledge(4)abouthowtokeepmentallyfit.(5)Therearealotofwaystocurbmentalhealthproblemsandkeeppsychologicallyhealthy.(6)Firstly,findtherealcauseofyourmentalhealthproblemandseewhetheryoucandosomethingtomakeachange.(6)Secondly,learntorelaxyourselfandtakeexercisetoreleasethepressure.(6)Lastly,youmayfindithelpfultotalktoyourpartnerorfriendaboutyourproblem,orseeksupportandadvicefromapsychologicalconsultant.【点评】(1)总述心理健康问题的现状(2)when引导时间状语从句(3)承上启下,引出心理健康问题的原因(4)意为“忽视”,介词about后接“how+to”结构(5)承上启下,引出心理健康问题的解决办法(6)引出三种解决心理健康问题的方法【思路二】第一段指出心理健康问题的严重性;第二段分析原因:失业,经济危机,工作或学习压力大,缺乏沟通,生活或工作中缺少支持i第三段提出解决的方法。【范文二】HowtoKeepPsychologicallyHealthy?(1)Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplearelivingunderpressure,nomatterwhattheageandsex.Somanymentalproblemshavebeenwidelyrealized.Andrecentresearchhasshown(2)thatthepsychologicalproblemisoneofthemaincausesofleadingtodisease.(3)Therearemanyreasonsofcausingthepsychologicalproblem,forexample,amanloseshisjobandsuffersadifficulteconomiccondition,someonemayworkorstudyunderheavypressure,lackcommunicationwitharoundpeople,orhaslittlesupportsinlifeandworkand,SOon.(4)Althoughmanyproblemswemaybeface,therearealotofwaystocurbthementalhealthproblems.Youcalltakesomesimpleexercisesinhomeoroffice.Afterlongperiodofwork,youCantakeajourneytohaveabriskholiday.(5)Ifyoukeephealthypsychologicallyandyoureallytakesomeconcernonyourself,thehappylifewillgiveyoumorepassionandenergy.【点评】(1)开门见山,直击主题(2)that引导宾语从句(3)承上启下,引出心理健康问题的原因(4)转折,引出心理疾病的治疗方法(5)if引导条件状语从句

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