Part Ⅴ Writing (30 minutes) Directions: For th
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Part Ⅴ Writing (30 minutes) Directions:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Day My Classmate Fell Ill (or Got Injured). You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1.简单叙述一下这位同学生病(或受伤)的情况
2.同学、老师和我是如何帮助他/她的
3.人与人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是……
The Day My Classmate Fell Ill (or Got Injured) 请帮忙给出正确答案和分析，谢谢！
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正确答案：
Lastyear,aterriblefluspreadthewholecity.Oneofmydormmates,Sunlin,wasstruckdownbythevirus.Heranahighfever,andthroughthebody.Andhecouldnoteatanythingandseemedtobecomemoreilleachday.WeweresoworriedthatwerealisedthatsomethingmustbedonetohelpSunLinoutofhisagony.Wesenthimtotheuniversityclinicsandpaidforthetreatmentandmedicinewithmoneyfromourlifemaintenance.Thenewsquicklyreachedeverybodyinourclass.Atfirst,somestudentswereafaidthattheycouldbeinflectedtoo.Fortunately,everyonethoughttheyshouldtrytheurbesttohelphim.SometeachersprovideddailynecessitiesandsomestudentsrecordedtheEnglishclassforhimsothatSunLincouldkeepupwithhisstudy.Witheverybody'scareandhelp,SunLinsoonwasabletobeupandaboutandcomebacktotheclass.Fromthisevent,wealllearnedthatoursocietyisfulloflove,warmandpeacefull,inwhichpeoplewehtermanorwoman,youngorold,arealwaystoredytodoothersafavor.Justlikeafamoussonggoes,"theworldwillturnintoheavenonlyeveryonecontributeaslittle."andIdobelievethatthismaximwillliveforever.
