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【审题】本题要求写一封建议信。根据提纲要求，本文应包括以下内容：简单介绍自己并总述写信的目的；具体说明存在问题或提出具体建议；表达自己的祝愿。注意措辞要得当，切忌把学校说得一无是处；同时注意条理性，摆出事实支持自己的观点。【思路一】第一段交待写信的目的；第二段说明学校教学和生活存在的问题并提出建议；第三段表达自己的祝愿。【范文一】ALettertotheUniversityPresidentMay30,2008DearMr．President。(1)I'mwritingtoputupsomesuggestionsconcerningourteachingandcampuslife．AsasophomorefromtheMathDepartment，Iamquite(2)satisfiedwiththepresentconditionofouruniversity，(3)butI'dliketosaythatthereisstillsomeroomforimprovement．(4)First，Ibelievethatmoreattention(5)shouldbepaidtotheguidanceofourstudymethods．(6)Tosomeextent，universitystudentsarccapableofstudyingbythemselves，but(7)moreoftenthannever，wefindourselves(8)atalossastochoosegoodbookstoreadandappropriatetopicsforourresearch．Itisclearthatweneedsomeadvicefrom0111-teachers．(4)Second，moreactivitiesshouldbeconductedtomakeourcampuslifemorecolorful．I'msorrytosay(9)thatthepresentlifeoncampusisquiteboring．Weneedmoremeaningfulactivitiesorganizedtoenrichourcollegelifeandenableustostudymoreefficiently．IhopeyouCallconsidermysuggestions．Thankyou．Bestregards!Yourssincerely，LiMing【点评】(1)开门见山，提出写信目的(2)“对…表示满意”(3)but话锋一转，提到不满意的方面(4)列举需要改进的两个方面(5)被动句的应用更起强调作用(6)“在一定程度上”(7)“经常情况下”(8)“不知所措”(9)宾语从句【思路二】第一段交待写信的目的；第二段说明学校教学和生活存在的问题并提出建议；第三段表达自己的祝愿。【范文二】ALettertotheUniversityPresidentMay30,2008DearMr．President，(1)Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerningourteachingmethodandcampuslife．(2)Firstofall，thedrawbacksoftesthavelongbeennoticed．Testorientedteachingfailstofostercreativityorindividualtalent．Thewayteachersteachistimeconsumingwithstowresults．Teachingmethodsshould(3)facilitatethedevelopmentofstudents’interestandhelpthemtoform.thegoodhabitoflearningbythemselves．(2)What’smore，campusactivitiesshouldbeorganized．Theseactivities(4)rangefromacademictorecreational，suchasacademicreports，socialconsultingservices。speechcontests，poet’sclub，paintingclubs，singinganddancinggroups．etc．Theseactivitiesprovidestudentswithtwomajoradvantages．(5)Foronething，theyplayapositiveroleinimprovingstudents’studies．(5)Foranother，theactivitiesalealsohelpfulforstudentslivinginthe“ivorytower”whohavelittlechanceto(6)getintouchwithsociety．1wouldbehappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard．Bestwishes!Yourssincerely，LiMing【点评】(1)开门见山，提出写信目的(2)提出改进的两个方面(3)促进学生的兴趣发展(4)“从学习到娱乐”(5)列举出两个好处(6)“接触社会”