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情景:你要去美国 想请你的朋友Jack帮你找一处住所。任务: 请你用英语给他写一个50个词左

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情景:你要去美国,想请你的朋友Jack帮你找一处住所。任务:
请你用英语给他写一个50个词左右的电子邮件。内容包括:
●去美国的目的;
●何时到达美国;
●在美国呆多久;
●对住所的要求。电子邮件写在答题卡上该题的序号后。请用下面格式。
Dear Jack,
Li Min 请帮忙给出正确答案和分析,谢谢!

参考答案

正确答案:

范文:
Dear Jack,
I’ 11 go to America for further study on April 15th, as the university has approved my application, which means I need to stay there for a year.Be- fore that, I am supposed to arrive there next month since there will be a lot of stuff to get prepared.That is why I would ask you to do me a favor and help me find an apartment.A simple one with kitchen and bathroom will do.
Thank you for your time.I am looking forward to seeing you there!

Li Min
写作点金:
1.电子邮件形式和句子长度不要太单调,有时短句和长句相问显得灵活。
2.写作多用从句会使得句子更长,而且句式灵活。比如:
I’ll go to America for ful’thcr study Oil April l5th,as the university hasapproved my application.It meallS I need to stay there for a year.
改为:I’u go to America for further study on April]5th,as the univer- sity hasapproved my application,which means I need to stay there for a year.
3.亲切、口语化的语言更加受欢迎,尤其用于这种朋友问的私人信件。例:A simple one with kitchen and bathroom will do.
4.电子邮件应写得简单明了,便于阅读,太长的内容可以用附件的方式发出。一个段落大多由一到三个句子组成。
高频词句:
further study深造,进修
That is why…这就是…的原因
do sb.a favor帮助某人做某事
look forward to sth.期待…

考点:美国,住所