Nowadays more and more people rely on computer
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Nowadays more and more people rely on computers or cell phones to communicate. It has therefore become very easy for them to forget the stroke order when writing some characters. Thus, many hold that more importance should be attached to Chinese handwriting; but some hold it is not so necessary to advocate it anymore due to the convenience of electronic devices. What do you think？ Please write an essay of about 400 words. You should supply an appropriate title for your essay. In the first part of your writing you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization , grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.请帮忙给出正确答案和分析，谢谢！
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正确答案：Importance Should Be Attached to Chinese HandwritingNowadays an increasing number of people are using computers to write emails and cell phones to send text messages. As a result it has become more and more difficult for many of them to write Chinese characters properly. There is a growing concern that modern communication devices are threatening the Chinese handwriting tradition that is a characteristic of Chinese culture and civilization. As far as I am concerned greater importance should be attached to Chinese handwriting.To begin with Chinese handwriting carries the beauty of Chinese culture. As one famous Chinese professor stated: "One can only appreciate the beauty of ancient Chinese literature through the complex Chinese characters". That is to say the complex Chinese characters are the manifestation of traditional Chinese aesthetics. Different from other languages Chinese characters are composed of strokes which carry so much information such as the delicacy diversity and diligence which are regarded as reflections of Chinese culture and personality. To many foreigners who are fascinated with Chinese culture one of the most important lessons in China is learning to write Chinese characters which to them is such an entity of charm and mystery. Thus to promote Chinese handwriting is to preserve the national culture.Secondly people need be reminded of the essence of their cultural heritage by attaching greater importance to Chinese handwriting. Despite the introduction of modernization brought by cell phones or computers our ancestors* heritage root should never be forgotten. Fortunately some actions have been taken recently in China. In order to rescue the tradition a letter writing campaign has begun. Aiming to encourage people to send more handwritten letters campaign organizers have established the first letter museum in China and their efforts have encouraged people to pay much more attention to Chinese handwriting which before to some extent was ignored.Thirdly to advocate Chinese handwriting is to improve one"s health. It is well known that health problems may occur as a result of the repetition of hand movements and forcefulness on a keyboard. According to a survey conducted by a hospital in China nearly 80% of computer users have suffered at least once from strained wrist and back caused by typing. In addition frequent contact with computers or cell phones exerts a higher risk on one"s sight level and immune system which caused by radiation from the equipment. Therefore handwriting is obviously a safer way to communicate.In conclusion with a long and splendid history Chinese characters play a unique role in preserving the national identity. People should attach greater importance to Chinese handwriting so as not to lose the beauty of this art of Chinese culture and civilization.
ImportanceShouldBeAttachedtoChineseHandwritingNowadaysanincreasingnumberofpeopleareusingcomputerstowriteemailsandcellphonestosendtextmessages.Asaresult,ithasbecomemoreandmoredifficultformanyofthemtowriteChinesecharactersproperly.ThereisagrowingconcernthatmoderncommunicationdevicesarethreateningtheChinesehandwritingtraditionthatisacharacteristicofChinesecultureandcivilization.AsfarasIamconcerned,greaterimportanceshouldbeattachedtoChinesehandwriting.Tobeginwith,ChinesehandwritingcarriesthebeautyofChineseculture.AsonefamousChineseprofessorstated:"OnecanonlyappreciatethebeautyofancientChineseliteraturethroughthecomplexChinesecharacters".Thatistosay,thecomplexChinesecharactersarethemanifestationoftraditionalChineseaesthetics.Differentfromotherlanguages,Chinesecharactersarecomposedofstrokeswhichcarrysomuchinformation,suchasthedelicacy,diversityanddiligencewhichareregardedasreflectionsofChinesecultureandpersonality.TomanyforeignerswhoarefascinatedwithChineseculture,oneofthemostimportantlessonsinChinaislearningtowriteChinesecharacters,whichtothemissuchanentityofcharmandmystery.ThustopromoteChinesehandwritingistopreservethenationalculture.Secondly,peopleneedberemindedoftheessenceoftheirculturalheritagebyattachinggreaterimportancetoChinesehandwriting.Despitetheintroductionofmodernizationbroughtbycellphonesorcomputers,ourancestors*heritagerootshouldneverbeforgotten.Fortunately,someactionshavebeentakenrecentlyinChina.Inordertorescuethetradition,aletterwritingcampaignhasbegun.Aimingtoencouragepeopletosendmorehandwrittenletters,campaignorganizershaveestablishedthefirstlettermuseuminChinaandtheireffortshaveencouragedpeopletopaymuchmoreattentiontoChinesehandwritingwhichbefore,tosomeextent,wasignored.Thirdly,toadvocateChinesehandwritingistoimproveone"shealth.Itiswellknownthathealthproblemsmayoccurasaresultoftherepetitionofhandmovementsandforcefulnessonakeyboard.AccordingtoasurveyconductedbyahospitalinChina,nearly80%ofcomputerusershavesufferedatleastoncefromstrainedwristandbackcausedbytyping.Inaddition,frequentcontactwithcomputersorcellphonesexertsahigherriskonone"ssightlevelandimmunesystemwhichcausedbyradiationfromtheequipment.Thereforehandwritingisobviouslyasaferwaytocommunicate.Inconclusion,withalongandsplendidhistory,Chinesecharactersplayauniqueroleinpreservingthenationalidentity.PeopleshouldattachgreaterimportancetoChinesehandwriting,soasnottolosethebeautyofthisartofChinesecultureandcivilization.
