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正确答案：Before I fell ill I had been the bully under our roofs owing to my doting parents. Once segregated and confined in a small house on the hillside of the garden I felt like being deposed into a cold palace and I began to taste the bitterness of depression and frustration immediately. One spring evening my parents held a banquet in the garden where all sorts of flowers were in full bloom. Instantly a crowd of guests gathered together and their laughter was heard all over there. Without being noticed I lifted the curtain in my small room only to spy the bustle of a kaleidoscopic world down in the garden and my elder sisters brothers and my cousins were shuttling among the guests each being full of joy. In no time I was thrown into a feeling of sorrowful anger at being forgotten and abandoned by the rest of the world and could not help crying my heart out.
第一句“在得病以前，……郁郁不得志起来”很长，且结构松散，不宜直接翻译，可根据意群，采用分译法将其分成三个句子，使译文结构紧凑，符合英语行文特点。2．“宠爱”可翻译成doteon或favor，但通常不用pet，pet作为动词时，指“轻柔地抚摸或爱抚”。3．“横行霸道”需要意译，意思是“为所欲为，想干什么就干什么”。即getone’sownway或tobeabully。4．“隔离”可译为beisolatedfrom／beseparatedfrom。5．“拘禁”可译为belockedin或confinedto／in。6．“被打入冷宫”是一种借用，强调一种被冷落的感觉，可直译也可意泽，beingdeposedintoacoldpalace或beingisolatedandconfinedinasmallhouse／chamber。7．“郁郁不得志”可译为feelgloomyanddepressed。8．第二句“一个春天的傍晚，……笑语四溢”也须采用分泽法，分成两句话来翻译，因为它实际上讲到了两件事情：一是指父母设宴，二是指宾客云集。9．“百花怒放”可译为allsortsofflowersareinfullbloom。10．“设宴”可泽为toholdabanquet。11．“霎时”可译为inaveryshorttime或instantly。12．“宾客云集”可泽为acrowdofguestsgatheredtogether。13．第三句“我在山坡的小屋里，……一片喧闹”中“悄悄”指未引人注意，可泽为withoutbeingnoticed；“窥”指偷看，可用spy或peep。14．“大千世界”译为theboundlessworld或akaleidoscopicworld。15．“喜气洋洋”译为befullofjoy。16．最后一句“一霎时，……禁不住痛哭起来”中“摈弃”即abandon。17．“兜上心头”是指心里产生某种情绪，可用bethrownintoafeelingof或haveafeelingof来表达。