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正确答案：Apartment Wanted① I am Robert an oversea student from America 19 years old. I have been studying Chinese in Peking University for more than two years. This summer my parents will visit Beijing and stay with me for about a month ② so I am eager to find an apartment in the neighborhood of the campus for our family reunion.③ I would like to rent an apartment with one living room two bedrooms one independent kitchen and bathroom with 24 hours hot water supply. ④ It will be preferable if it is equipped with laundry facilities broadband and cable TV.⑤ I'm willing to pay up to 2000 Yuan for the right apartment for one month. ⑥ If you have one available please call or e-mail me. My mobile phone number: 13900000000 e-mail address: [email protected] com.Thanks!
Apartment Wanted① I am Robert, an oversea student from America, 19 years old. I have been studying Chinese in Peking University for more than two years. This summer, my parents will visit Beijing and stay with me for about a month, ② so I am eager to find an apartment in the neighborhood of the campus for our family reunion.③ I would like to rent an apartment with one living room, two bedrooms, one independent kitchen and bathroom with 24 hours hot water supply. ④ It will be preferable if it is equipped with laundry facilities, broadband and cable TV.⑤ I'm willing to pay up to 2000 Yuan for the right apartment for one month. ⑥ If you have one available, please call or e-mail me. My mobile phone number: 13900000000, e-mail address: [email protected] com.Thanks! 解析： ①审题及布局。题目要求写一篇应用文[考频：5]：房屋求租广告。写作时目的要明确，表述要清楚，要让读者准确理解广告信息。在布局上，按照提纲的要求展开写作即可。第一段说明自己的身份和租房的目的；第二段简单叙述理想公寓的条件，如房间大小、室内设施；第三段告知自己能够承受的房租费用和联系方式。②语言。本文是一则广告，因此应该多使用口语化的表达，力求简洁、清晰，避免使用生僻词汇。就时态而言，因为多为讲述现在事实，采用一般现在时即可，其中某些涉及未来事件的表达可使用一般将来时。
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I am ______. I ______ University for ______, so I am eager to find an apartment in the neighborhood of the ______ for ______.
I would like to rent an apartment ______. It will be preferable if it is equipped with ______.
I'm willing to pay up to ______ Yuan for tile right apartment for one month. If you have one available, please call or e-mail me. My mobile phone number: ______, e-mail address: ______.
Thanks!