第二节 书面表达 情景：你们班昨天上午去山上植树了。 任务：请用英语写一篇50词左右的日记。
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第二节 书面表达
情景：你们班昨天上午去山上植树了。
任务：请用英语写一篇50词左右的日记。内容包括：
1．何时，去哪里植树；
2．同学们劳动的场景；
3．什么时候回来的；
4．植树是非常有意义的。
请用下面格式:
Sunday April 10 Sunny请帮忙给出正确答案和分析，谢谢！
参考答案
正确答案：Sunday April 10 SunnyYesterday morning I got up at 6:00. Because we would go to plant trees on the hill. When wegot there we began to work right now. Some students dug pits some carried trees some plantedthem and some watered the trees. All my classmates worked hard and happily. When we finished at five we went home together. We all felt that we had done a meaningful thing.
Sunday April 10 SunnyYesterday morning I got up at 6:00. Because we would go to plant trees on the hill. When wegot there, we began to work right now. Some students dug pits, some carried trees, some plantedthem, and some watered the trees. All my classmates worked hard and happily. When we finished at five, we went home together. We all felt that we had done a meaningful thing. 解析： 第一步：审题
1．题型：提纲作文
2．文体：日记
第二步：框架分析
1．日记格式；
2．点出每个要点。
第三步：列出写作思路
1．植树的时间和地点；
2．劳动的场景；
3．大家的感受。
第四步：列出关键词和词组
plant trees on thehill；dug pits；carried trees；planted them；watered the trees；worked hard and happy ；felt that we had done a meaningful thing，etc.
第五步：落笔成文
