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正确答案：More Space Is Required for Real-Life CommunicationNowadays with the development of social media especially the network more and more people especially teens tend to use the Internet to communicate with their parents. While some hold that the Internet serves as a very good means of parent-child communication many others argue that virtual communication online actually undermines parent-child relationship. I am with the latter believing that more space should be given to real-life communication which boosts honesty trust and concentration.Firstly real-life communication is much better than communication online in terms of enhancing parent-child relationship for the former can better guarantee honesty of the communication. Real-life communication is often a combination of verbal communication and body-language communication. And it is often done in an extemporaneous manner. These two factors together ensure that people have little chance to ask for others" advice or make up lies or excuses without looking or sounding awkwardly during communication. Therefore real-life communication itself constitutes a confirmation of honesty.Secondly real-life communication deserves more attention than online communication for it can eliminate distrust between parents and children. According to a recent survey most children feel disgusted if their parents stalk or follow their accounts anonymously on social media. However what they do not realize is that they barely talk with their parents in their daily life and thus parents have to do in that way so as to know them well. Therefore both sides should talk with each other through real-life communication and distrust between parents and children will be greatly eliminated. The more frequent face-to-face communication is the less distrust and conflicts between parents and children will be. Thus full play should be given to real-life communication.Thirdly real-life communication is more desirable than online communication for parents and children can concentrate better on it. With the help of multi-model expressions including frequent eye-contacts and body languages there is little chance for parents or children to be distracted when communicating. However when communicating online children may browse other websites send e-mails or even talk with different people simultaneously which surely undermines the degree of concentration on each part making parents feel that they are not important. Thus in order to improve parent-child relationship it is better to communicate face-to-face.In a nutshell compared with communication through social media and social networking real-life communication deserves more attention for it better ensures honesty and trust between parents and children with a certain degree of concentration involved in it. It is especially true that parent-child communication deserves greater attention for the relationship between parents and children is usually quite delicate.
MoreSpaceIsRequiredforReal-LifeCommunicationNowadays,withthedevelopmentofsocialmedia,especiallythenetwork,moreandmorepeople,especiallyteens,tendtousetheInternettocommunicatewiththeirparents.WhilesomeholdthattheInternetservesasaverygoodmeansofparent-childcommunication,manyothersarguethatvirtualcommunicationonlineactuallyunderminesparent-childrelationship.Iamwiththelatter,believingthatmorespaceshouldbegiventoreal-lifecommunication,whichboostshonesty,trustandconcentration.Firstly,real-lifecommunicationismuchbetterthancommunicationonlineintermsofenhancingparent-childrelationship,fortheformercanbetterguaranteehonestyofthecommunication.Real-lifecommunicationisoftenacombinationofverbalcommunicationandbody-languagecommunication.Anditisoftendoneinanextemporaneousmanner.Thesetwofactorstogetherensurethatpeoplehavelittlechancetoaskforothers"adviceormakeupliesorexcuseswithoutlookingorsoundingawkwardlyduringcommunication.Therefore,real-lifecommunicationitselfconstitutesaconfirmationofhonesty.Secondly,real-lifecommunicationdeservesmoreattentionthanonlinecommunication,foritcaneliminatedistrustbetweenparentsandchildren.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,mostchildrenfeeldisgustediftheirparentsstalkorfollowtheiraccountsanonymouslyonsocialmedia.However,whattheydonotrealizeisthattheybarelytalkwiththeirparentsintheirdailylifeandthusparentshavetodointhatwaysoastoknowthemwell.Therefore,bothsidesshouldtalkwitheachotherthroughreal-lifecommunicationanddistrustbetweenparentsandchildrenwillbegreatlyeliminated.Themorefrequentface-to-facecommunicationis,thelessdistrustandconflictsbetweenparentsandchildrenwillbe.Thus,fullplayshouldbegiventoreal-lifecommunication.Thirdly,real-lifecommunicationismoredesirablethanonlinecommunicationforparentsandchildrencanconcentratebetteronit.Withthehelpofmulti-modelexpressionsincludingfrequenteye-contactsandbodylanguages,thereislittlechanceforparentsorchildrentobedistractedwhencommunicating.However,whencommunicatingonline,childrenmaybrowseotherwebsites,sende-mailsoreventalkwithdifferentpeoplesimultaneously,whichsurelyunderminesthedegreeofconcentrationoneachpart,makingparentsfeelthattheyarenotimportant.Thus,inordertoimproveparent-childrelationship,itisbettertocommunicateface-to-face.Inanutshell,comparedwithcommunicationthroughsocialmediaandsocialnetworking,real-lifecommunicationdeservesmoreattention,foritbetterensureshonestyandtrustbetweenparentsandchildren,withacertaindegreeofconcentrationinvolvedinit.Itisespeciallytruethatparent-childcommunicationdeservesgreaterattentionfortherelationshipbetweenparentsandchildrenisusuallyquitedelicate.