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After graduating from university some student

2022-08-01 22:14:03 问答库 阅读 167 次

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After graduating from university, some students struggle to go to super cities, such as Beijing and Shanghai, while some choose to go back to their hometowns, maybe a provincial capital or a small town. Which do you think is better? Give reasons for your answer. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Where Would You Go after Graduation?请帮忙给出正确答案和分析,谢谢!

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正确答案:Where Would You Go after Graduation?After graduation some students choose to go to super cities for career development while others prefer to return to their hometowns. As for myself I would like to go back to my hometown.I have made this decision because of the following reasons. Firstly I am a big fish in a small pond if I go back to my hometown. Comparatively speaking competition there is not so keen as in super cities. After years of hard learning at university I have obtained much knowledge and skills with which I have little difficulty in finding a suitable job in my hometown. Secondly I have been used to everything in my home city. Climate there quite fits me. I have many friends schoolmates and relatives whom I can turn to for help when in trouble. If I go back to my home city everybody will be waiting for me and I will be able to settle down comfortably without any trouble and waste of time. Thirdly if I go back to my home city I can look after my parents. If I live in the same city with them I can visit them very often and help them whenever it is necessary.In short my choice is based on a careful consideration of my capabilities background and personal demand.
本题是一个对比选择型题目。这里给出了一个与大学生切身相关的现实问题,即:大学毕业之后应该选择去哪里发展?有些人努力去北京、上海等大城市,有些人则选择回到家乡。要求考生从这两种地方中做一个选择,然后说明做出这个选择的原因。本题是生活话题,可发挥的余地很大,仁者见仁,智者见智。生活与工作密不可分,要一起谈。本题的写法可采用常规框架结构:一个观点,几条理由。谈理由时,思路应该开阔,就业机会、工资收入、气候、设施、亲友等因素都可作为理由。思路1:到超级大城市去拼搏。选择到超级大城市里工作的理由有很多,北京是中国的政治、经济、文化中心,就业机会众多——既有国家机关事业单位,高校科研院所,又有世界知名的外企,可选择的公司很多,空间巨大。这些城市条件好,基础设施一流、人文环境良好。但不好的地方在于,超级大城市人才济济,竞争激烈,工作压力大。生存成本高,住房、交通等费用都远远高于其他地方,如果不能找到薪水较高的工作,比较难生存。思路2:回到家乡发展。回家乡工作也有许多好处,环境比较熟悉,气候也适合自己。同学、熟人和关系要多一些,办事方便;另外,也便于照顾父母。竞争相对不太激烈,购房难度不大,生活很容易安稳下来。相对的劣势在于,就业机会选择不多,发展空间有限,工资收入低,风气氛围、人文条件比超级大城市落后。范文采用了思路2,选择回家乡发展。

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