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正确答案：Before I fell ill I had been a bully under our roofs owing to my doting parents. Once segregated and confined in a small house on the hillside of the garden I felt like being deposed into a cold palace and I began to taste the bitterness of depression and frustration immediately. One spring evening my parents held a banquet in the garden where all sorts of flowers were in full bloom. Instantly a crowd of guests gathered together and their laughter was heard all over there. Without being noticed I lifted the curtain in my small room only to spy the bustle of a kaleidoscopic world down in the garden and my elder sisters brothers and my cousins were shuttling among the guests each being full of joy. In no time I was thrown into a feeling of sorrowful anger at being forgotten and abandoned by the rest of the world and could not help crying my heart out.
1．第一句“在得病以前，……郁郁不得志起来”很长，且结构松散，不宜直接翻译，可根据意群采用分译法将其分成三个句子，使译文结构紧凑，符合英语行文特点。“宠爱”可翻译成doteon或favor，但通常不用pet，pet作为动词时，指“轻柔地抚摸或爱抚”；“横行霸道”需要意译，意思是“为所欲为，想于什么就干什么”，即getone"sownway或tobeabully；“隔离”可译为beisolated／separatedfrom。2．第一句中“被打入冷宫”是一种借用，强调一种被冷落的感觉，可直译也可意译，译为beingdeposedintoacoldpalace或beingisolatedandconfinedinasmallhouse／chamber。“郁郁不得志”可译为feelgloomyanddepressed或tastethebitternessofdepressionandfrustration。3．第二句“一个春天的傍晚，……笑语四溢”也需采用分译法，分成两句话来翻译，因为它实际上讲到了两件事情：一是父母设宴，二是宾客云集。“百花怒放”可译为allsortsofflowerswereinfullbloom。4．第三句“我在山坡的小屋里，……一片喧闹”中的“悄悄”指未引人注意，可译为Withoutbeingnoticed；“窥”指偷看，可用spy或peep；“大千世界”译为theboundlessworld或akaleidoscopicworld。5．最后一句“一霎时，……禁不住痛哭起来”中的“摒弃”可用abandoned；“兜上心头”是指心里产生某种情绪，可用bethrownintoafeelingof或haveafeelingof来表达。